Friday, January 31, 2014

Yotsumono: Old Growth





















alas,
the old growth trees
whittled down to toothpicks


' O, my God '
now just a euphemism


the online thesaurus
neither my friend
nor foe


finding the way -
you just can't get there from here



4 comments:

Mary Ahearn said...

I enjoyed these very much. Things to mull over and over. Thanks!

Bill said...

This is a good one.

bandit said...

Hi, Mary, hi, Bill,

There's a bit of a thematic structure running through this linked piece. Ill advised in a true "link and shift" category.

bandit said...

Edits applied to break-away from uchikoshi and phrasings for meter and phonics.