tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8824606926603448809.post3333273534946663275..comments2024-03-25T05:50:50.081-05:00Comments on HAIKU BANDIT SOCIETY: tumbling down the alley: a solo shisan renkubandithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04291863523347898783noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8824606926603448809.post-86142289958373484392017-06-19T19:41:11.031-05:002017-06-19T19:41:11.031-05:00edited June 18, 2017 Banditedited June 18, 2017 Banditbandithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04291863523347898783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8824606926603448809.post-37903593436683367602010-12-02T08:51:32.333-06:002010-12-02T08:51:32.333-06:00I'm with PA on this.
And I also needed the ex...I'm with PA on this.<br /><br />And I also needed the explanation of the form to appreciate the technical part, though I liked the poem without it.Jean Spitzerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13520415864511680025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8824606926603448809.post-9012720337400570902010-12-01T15:05:02.396-06:002010-12-01T15:05:02.396-06:00A love verse, part of the requirements of this lin...A love verse, part of the requirements of this linked verse form.<br /><br />'if detained or captured, I will disavow any knowledge of any such mission statement, even on pain of death'<br /><br />Also, we have a blossom verse, as well as the moon, by default, always autumn, unless otherwise stated. All seasons receive a reference, in this shortened modern form of haikai-no-renga, in chronological order. Spring and Autumn receive two slots, for they are the major seasons.<br /><br />'Winter?', you ask? Why, it's the whale, of course, according to traditional Japanese kigo.<br /><br />Each section (there are four)should be self-contained, creating four poems that meld together, if you will.bandithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04291863523347898783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8824606926603448809.post-55691216243064147022010-12-01T14:10:42.284-06:002010-12-01T14:10:42.284-06:00as we age together
you remain
so hard to please
...as we age together <br />you remain<br />so hard to please<br /><br />I love this one (and the cherry / blush)Pasadena Adjacenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09031325790590238246noreply@blogger.com