today's moon -- will anyone not be taking up his pen?
I enjoyed this haiku. Very well done.
Hi, Mike,These birds moved from tree to tree, creating showers of rain water loosened from the leaves.
So that's what did it? Sounds perfectly plausible to me. Haiku logic.
edited June 19, 2017 Bandit
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I enjoyed this haiku. Very well done.
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ReplyDeleteThese birds moved from tree to tree, creating showers of rain water loosened from the leaves.
So that's what did it? Sounds perfectly plausible to me. Haiku logic.
ReplyDeleteedited June 19, 2017 Bandit
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