Sunday, August 4, 2013

Summer in the City






















iridescence -
amidst the dandelions,
sleek crows forage
through bits of bright litter









stinging nettles,
young maples like weeds -
the mystery behind
your manicured lawns









trumpet vines
through the broken tarmac -
gangbangers on the corner
argue on their iPhones









the texture of twine -
high summer sun bakes
the old brick wall








a dusty-red wren
perches on a pail -
heat shimmer's glare
above the hot-tar roof









that musty smell,
limestone and broken glass -
the stain of fallen walnuts
stuck to our hands












8 comments:

  1. Nice to see the four-liners, too. Of the last in this post, I suspect the smell will blow away, but the stain will not come off. We used to have a walnut tree outside the house. I used to sleep out some summer nights beneath it. If ever I rolled onto and crushed a fallen walnut casing, the dark brown stain was appalling.
    I greatly enjoy the patina of your poetry, Bandit.

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  2. I'm surprised to find walnut trees I hadn't noticed scattered throughout the neighborhood. Most seem to have grown opportunistically, the seeds cast about by past generations of squirrels and gone wild in un-manicured spaces between lots.

    To our benefit, the city has planted some disease resistant elm on some boulevards. We once had thousands, a monoculture decimated some 30 thirty years ago. They were more substantial and cold-hardy than those in in Sendai, e.g..

    Guess what? An entire street nearby planted with gingko. Talk about the smell! Dottie and I sniffed them out ...

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  3. Hi Will,

    Makes me glad I no longer live in a city. A good group.

    Adelaide

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  4. Very much liked each one, Will. This one, though, reaally got to me:

    stinging nettles,
    young maples like weeds -
    the mystery behind
    your manicured lawns


    Mind if I share it at word pond?

    Thanks, either way,

    Donna

    Donna,

    Be my guest. It's gratifying to hear your praise. I'll post a photo from the East Side archives ...

    willie

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  5. ... and, an edit and update to the group.

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  6. May I post the stinging nettles now or are you still adding something you call "an edit and update to the group."? Not sure what you mean by that . . . thanks.

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  7. Go! You know as well as I we never stop ... ;)

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