It's four 'o' clock in the morning
between the real and the unreal
from one most tender, the other one floating
as I leave this room, so neat and tidy
to enable you access to the world
' upon awakening will you recall that kiss?
I tug on the thread ... '
Bandit/Liuyue
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4 comments:
Nice flow. I’m kind of new to poetry, is this considered free verse?
I forgot to use my sign in. Google has become terrible to work in.
It harkens back to ancient Japanese verse between a man and woman, though this not of a traditional structure.
Nor was the purpose. Spontaneous, you might say,, the authors having reconnected after decades. Take it as genuine in feeling, though unattainable to fulfill.
Still,, I do not regret the circumstance
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