It's four 'o' clock in the morning
between the real and the unreal
from one most tender,
the other one floating
I leave this room so neat and tidy
to enable you access to the world
' upon awakening will you recall that kiss?
I tug on the thread ... '
Bandit/Liuyue
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5 comments:
Nice flow. I’m kind of new to poetry, is this considered free verse?
I forgot to use my sign in. Google has become terrible to work in.
It harkens back to ancient Japanese verse between a man and woman, though this not of a traditional structure.
Nor was the purpose. Spontaneous, you might say,, the authors having reconnected after decades. Take it as genuine in feeling, though unattainable to fulfill.
Still,, I do not regret the circumstance
they re-
call the I
kiss which
did not
happen
Your writing, so many forms, beauty of the human, thank you, W. DF
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